Pros: nice layout Cons: maybe the B site is not perfect but the map is really enjoyable Improvements: nothing Notes: good job

Redgnom, I put all 3 of your maps on our server www.torontodarkly.ca. Ok, thoughts. You have mad talent, your brushwork is intense, by far some of the best custom mapwork I have seen in ages. I can relate to your texture work, the feel you have, what you're trying to achieve. All 3 maps have been very well recieved by our members and regs. Further thoughts.

Take your talent and make something a little more open. Your mapwork can seem a bit "dark", a bit tight. Lot's of tight stairwells, corridors, etc. Gameplay is always > looks, I am speaking from experience, some of my best looking work is least popular. Open it up a bit, brighten it up a bit, you will hit homeruns with whatever you do. Nice work.

Hey I see you are a pro at making maps, so I will ask if you want to add me to friends thomasf95 you will have full admin to create a map with imumity and an advertisement on our website and on our server.

Horrible FPS for me, needs more optimizing.

Judging from the screenshots, it looks awesome !

Nice map with fresh looks, i like the new textures aswell in screenshot 2