Pros: You have some cool ideas on how to make a challenging surf. I'm not a very good skill surfer but could see how some new ideas could be fun. Nice skybox and I liked the detailing. The lighting and texture selection was good as well. Cons: Through the majority of the map I felt like it was slow paced and rather unexciting, despite the good ideas. I think your brushwork could have been better and more exciting, rather than the single ramps. The only reason I bring this up is because with the extreme popularization of smooth ramps in surf maps, they are coming to be expected, and I feel they really add to the overall quality and flow of the map. I think the general detailing could use some work, the detailing is plentiful, but the quality could use some work with better alignment and placement. Improvements: Improvements are strewn out in the cons section... Notes: This is great for a first map, you have potential as a mapper. Hope to see some more good ideas in future maps :)