Map has a good style to it, texture choices all complement each other well along with the lighting on both the inside and outside contrasting each other beautifully.

Theres lots of cover available for players and enough room to still run around very easily. Some more use of angled geometry would be nice, its on the windows as well as the curving roof which is a nice effect along with the metal trusswork, the cement bases of which seem odd to match the metal beams, if they were just a touch wider than the metal that may look good, slight angle on them too perhaps. Just my personal preference when it comes to those things,

Building design is good and courtyard well done, but maybe some more decal use may have made it a bit nicer looking.

Still, fun to play, got to try it for a little while earlier, round went pretty quick so it didn't last :P

Pros: Where should I start? Well all of the textures fit very well together and its nice that you added the doors and garages, so that it wasn't just walls all around, but it actually felt like you were playing there and not in some map. I love how you added the open middle, gives it a nice change from the crate packed outer part. The ambient sound fits this map very well and the radar (spelled backwards is radar :P) is awesome. I love when maps have radar ^^ The gameplay is awesome also. The boxes are well placed to optimize game play. I like the ramps that go down, it adds gameplay, looks, and atmosphere. Cons: When you are running from the somewhat dimly lit inside to the open HDR lit center, it is a bit of a blinding shock, to say the least. Also with boxes being the only cover, it would be nice to have something else to hide behind :P The lights are good, but it doesn't seem as if the light is actually coming from the lights. Improvements: Dim the HDR somehow? Maybe put a pillar in the middle so it changes up gameplay and looks a bit. Make it look like the light is coming from the light fixtures. Notes: It was hard to find cons on this map, but no map can ever be perfect. Hope this was enough info for you :P

Pros: A great addition to your collection. This map features a great layout and a nice lighting coming from all angles of the map. The structure design is pretty simple but yet detailed at the same time so not really that bad of a job, actually pretty good in several cases. The gameplay is excellent on this map showing a wide open area followed by the tight look around the corner indoors. The nice little map overlay on the screenshot is fantastic. :D Cons: none Improvements: some more detail but not really concerned with that, it looks great as is. Notes: overall a nice little map that compared to other maps, really gives you great gameplay and fun with your friends.

Wonderland isn't that far off