First serious attempt at anima

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CammieDee666

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Cammie's Shit ;)
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Here it is crits please

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    Posted by B0T Fuck them all. i like the origins. but the gun must aim in the middle of the screen, to the crosshair.

    But you cant see the parts of the gun that make it distinctive. Those origins make it look thin..

    Pixel 'Art' Is not real Art.
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    Fuck them all. i like the origins. but the gun must aim in the middle of the screen, to the crosshair.

    So you are here?
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    daisuke

    Maybe a tad higher?

    Ragin' Asian Ninja Warrior
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    ManTuna

    The wrist seems to be at 'too much of an angle' Try rotate the hand to the right some, so the wrist lines up.

    also, like wildbill said, the gun seems to be aiming to the side a bit too much.

    (it looks like it is going to the right for me, wildbill.)

    I make shit move
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    It looks like it's aiming off to the left some instead of right at the center. or am i seeing things?

    Want realism? Go play outside.
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    Origins = fail.

    Pixel 'Art' Is not real Art.
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    You should move the weapon more backwards, then the arms won't be that "stretched". Also, raise the end of the left arm and move the end of the right arm forward (talking of the green boxes), again this'll be more realistic (since they're supposed to be shoulders) and give you more space for movement.

    Respect is everything.
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    Posted by TheAssMan Id would like to see more of the side. It looks stupid like that. Show off the gun, its really detailed and interesting
    If you want to see the model go to CDG and download it for yourself

    im talking about the idle and ive already seen this model along with all the other shit EOD has just released. Im not the only one who browses that site

    a worthless fuckin' buddah hea
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    Posted by TheAssMan Id would like to see more of the side. It looks stupid like that. Show off the gun, its really detailed and interesting

    If you want to see the model go to CDG and download it for yourself

    Getting bored with FPSB
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    Id would like to see more of the side. It looks stupid like that. Show off the gun, its really detailed and interesting

    a worthless fuckin' buddah hea
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