The ring finger on the right hand should be pressed more firmly up against the grip i think. atm there's a considerable gap in there :(

these is some cool beans though, cant wait to see some more progress :D

That is not how you hold a revolver or any gun at all. Cupping the bottom of the grip does nothing -- good way to eat gun. Trigger hand should be high enough on the grip that the thumb can easily reach the hammer.

Browse this site and watch how he does it. The dude's left handed, but a real pro.

Yes. Good start . Wait...bit more right and down

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