Masada - Reload

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NoZTriX
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Update* Please ignore that the video is squeezed. To do. - Bolt pull action - Tweak the rifle movement

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    Its like anims from Modern Warfare 2, but its not problem

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    daisuke

    I think the magazine should have more velocity when it's being tossed away. Looks a bit too... leisurely?

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    ManTuna

    Looks better, but still needs work IMO.

    to me, the hand should throw the mag a bit faster. the flipping is pretty awesome though.

    to me the gun could use a bit more weight. The gun stays stationary throughout the whole sequence and it looks like it barely weighs anything. Maybe have it sway a bit or dip down when the mag is inserted since the gun isn't being controlled by both hands.

    I love the motions on the boltpull, but I think the hand should come back to idle about 5 or 6 frames faster IMO.

    very nice so far.

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    ManTuna

    IMO the gun should be angled down a bit more after the mag is taken out to show a bit of weight. The weapon seems pretty stiff between the magout and magin.

    As for the throwing anim - If you were going to keep the speed of the magazine flying away, the wrist needs to match up to it. The right wrist seems to casually throw the mag away (which at this speed would have the mag fall down more than to the right) So maybe give the right wrist a bit more snappy movement or just speed it up a tad.

    looking nice so far.

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    Posted by NoZTriX
    Posted by Kosai106 It looks extremely awkward when he throws the empty magazine away, imo.
    First time trying a sequence like this one so any tips on how it could be better would be appreciated:)

    When he throws the magazine away, he twists his wrist in naturally to the right. he should really throw it with his hand underneath it, or throw is more vertically down if you choose to keep the hand above it.

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    Posted by NoZTriX
    Posted by Kosai106 It looks extremely awkward when he throws the empty magazine away, imo.
    First time trying a sequence like this one so any tips on how it could be better would be appreciated:)

    looking damn good ! but you could make this even better here's what I recommend : -add some force in the mag throw -when he is taking the mag, make the gun move.that should make it better =] -awesome -I'd do a magtap but I won't tell you what to do you're noztrix not .exe =]

    good luck ;)

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    Posted by Kosai106 It looks extremely awkward when he throws the empty magazine away, imo.

    First time trying a sequence like this one so any tips on how it could be better would be appreciated:)

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    Futon

    More snap when he throws the mag.

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    Kosai106

    It looks extremely awkward when he throws the empty magazine away, imo.

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    I cant see the posts:/

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